Part 31 - Shattered Dreams

in Chapter 2 - Trail of Broken Hearts
Part 31 - Shattered Dreams
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Hobo of Justice 18th Jan 2018, 1:15 PM edit delete
Hobo of Justice
It’s a weird feeling.
It’s been years since I wrote down Shattered Dreams as the chapter 2 finale in the Power of the Universe outline (It’s not the finale anymore). This was the strip I was gonna be building up to. This was the special one.
And now we’re here. Shattered Dreams isn’t quite what I imagined it would be. It’s definitely been the hardest strip to make in all of PotU. A lot of that was just trying to live up to my own expectations that had built up. I’ve spent too long on it to know if it works or just feels cheap.

That said, I’m happy with it. It’s hard to step back and view it objectively, but the view from here isn’t so bad. I gave it my best shot, and hopefully that shows.

One more strip to go in Chapter 2. Part 32 will close it up. When there's a time frame for that I'll let you guys know. See ya then!
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sweetcloud1989 20th Jan 2018, 2:10 PM edit delete reply
I like Skuntank's demony cyborg laser eyes.
Hobo of Justice 21st Jan 2018, 2:22 AM edit delete reply
Hobo of Justice
When you get swole enough, your eyes light up.
Scientific fact.
Starmanfan 22nd Jan 2018, 10:36 PM edit delete reply
I totally thought the nuzlocke would end here but Richard and Aron have proved me wrong once again
Hobo of Justice 23rd Jan 2018, 10:40 PM edit delete reply
Hobo of Justice
Hopefully that’s a good thing!
I’m glad I get to make more. It’s been a special experience for me – to get to create something, tell a story, and share it.
shadowtitan2010 29th Jan 2018, 5:33 PM edit delete reply
That hyper potion is clearly cheating. I call foul
Hobo of Justice 29th Jan 2018, 9:22 PM edit delete reply
Hobo of Justice
The hyper potion is sorry for its actions. It would apologize, but lack of consciousness makes that difficult.
ROE 22nd Feb 2018, 7:59 AM edit delete reply
let's keep the emotional nut shots going in chapter 3!!
Hobo of Justice 22nd Feb 2018, 1:09 PM edit delete reply
Hobo of Justice
Can't have enough of those!
Always looking forward to the next one!
sweetcloud1989 16th Mar 2018, 9:22 AM edit delete reply
Did Lemon provide some Lemon Aid??
Hobo of Justice 23rd Mar 2018, 1:34 PM edit delete reply
Hobo of Justice
Oh, you know it!
And it's mot just any Lemon Aid, he's beat up enough to serve Pink Lemon Aid!
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